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PostPosted: Sat Jun 06, 2009 3:14 am 
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Bravo!

A nice mixture of new characters there, and I really liked the way that Lowell basically frakked himself up by his actions. A nice touch there, and even though it was written from his viewpoint, Halley's dissapointment and inner thoughts still somehow made themselves clear. A very nice touch. :)


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PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2009 1:10 am 
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Just finished re-reading the whole thing, and it's an awesome read. You've taken four new characters and made them all interesting and unique, and you summed the whole story up in your usual satisfying way. I really like how these side stories flesh out particular characters, and I think Halley really is warming to his new role and handling difficulties like a true leader.


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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:44 am 
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I came up with a new title the other day that I thought would be more amusing and fitting to the story itself. It's now called Guess Who's Coming to Dinner, for anyone else who might want to read it and can't seem to find it :wink:

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 7:20 am 
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Is it bad that originally I didn't get the reference? However, now I have, it is a stroke of genius H! Kudos!


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